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My Broken Heart
Contributed by
thewizard
on
Friday, 1st May 2009 @ 11:52:30 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I need to hold you near me
Run my fingers through your hair
Look into, your loving eyes again
Your love, I want to share
To spend our lives together
Forever, by your side
My love for you so strong
Something, I cannot hide
In the distance, far away
Your heart, I try to reach
Like waves along a shore
Alone, on an empty beach
I need to see, love in your eyes
Through, a window shine
I need to hold your body close
Oh, so close to mine
Please, come home to me
I need you, so much
Can you feel it, in your heart?
My love, reach out and touch
I want to be with you, forever
Sharing, love in my heart
If only, we could be as one
Not two lovers, now torn apart
Copyright ©
thewizard
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2009-05-01 11:52:30]
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Re: My Broken Heart
(User Rating: 1 )
by anomalei on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 08:47:04 AM AEST
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i'm sorry for your loss, heartbreak is terrible. =/
but pen and paper will seal your cracks, i promise. writing and time heals many things.
*JAE~ |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by kayleenicole on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 11:04:52 AM AEST
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wow. i dont think i could ever write as good as you do. im sorry for what your going through.
you have talent, dont let that go to waste.
in the end everything will be ok. if its not okay, its not the end.
-kaylee |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 11:28:54 AM AEST
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A beautiful piece, Paul....
You have really put your guts on the line here..
Well done..
Jenni |
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Re: My Broken Heart
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 2nd May 2009 @ 12:23:34 PM AEST
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the flow was luxurious, great work.
-Phil |
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