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Until Someone Dies

Contributed by lesoleilnoire on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:48:04 PM in AEST
Topic: Haiku



Cowered in cold fright,
hearing a bullet in flight,
innocence lies dead.




Copyright © lesoleilnoire ... [ 2009-12-14 20:48:04]
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Re: Until Someone Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 08:55:23 PM AEST
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We used to have a problem with freshmen and seniors getting in fights awhile ago but as it turns out it wasn't the class it was just the senior class, onces they graduated the fighting stopped I hope the fighting in your school stops soon to
Great poem
hope to read more soon
-Kelly


Re: Until Someone Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Monday, 14th December 2009 @ 09:48:13 PM AEST
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It is still staggering to me that these things now go on so often in the schools.

Heck when we were in school there was always a bully or being bullied but never did we ever think of going to school with a gun.

(Most times a good ass whoopin behind the bleachers cured it for good) LOL but anyway

I am sorry this is going on it is sad to me.
I also hope that things get better and you are all safe......

Three lines put fear in me and made me shake you always do so well with these!

Hugs
Michelle


Re: Until Someone Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by northernlights on Tuesday, 15th December 2009 @ 12:15:28 AM AEST
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you used the only words that were needed powerful and expressive


Re: Until Someone Dies (User Rating: 1 )
by dirk-velvet on Wednesday, 16th December 2009 @ 03:34:54 PM AEST
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gets the point across

as quick as the bullets flight.


Great Write ! ! !



Peace&Love&Always.

Dirk Velvet




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