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A Darkness He Will Never Feel
Contributed by
shelbygirl16
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Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 08:01:03 PM in AEST
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"Someone take away the pain. its following me. its suffocating me. im screaming for help. can you hear me luv? can you? i can see you. your not listening! help me. you did this to me luv. why cant you see me? i saw you...i could feel you. why cant you hear me?! plz dont walk away. i need you...."
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Re: A Darkness He Will Never Feel
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by lesoleilnoire on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 09:00:48 PM AEST
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Very powerful writing full of emotion. The title got my attention. I hope you feel better from this break up. Time heals.
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Re: A Darkness He Will Never Feel
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by zenmind on
Tuesday, 27th July 2010 @ 09:05:12 PM AEST
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| it sounds like something someone would text me in the middle of the night |
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Re: A Darkness He Will Never Feel
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by pooper on
Wednesday, 28th July 2010 @ 05:52:34 AM AEST
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I certainly feel your pain and anguish.
Many have been there. The salve is time and,,, believe me....company. Don't sit around feeling sorry for what happened, it probably was never meant to be.
Good luck, but I feel you won't nee it. |
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