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Market Street La Gal

Contributed by jaeann on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Bright lights, bright lights
now I no longer see.
Rumbling train, rumbling train
I wish I could not hear.
Roaring thunder, roaring thunder
take away my breath.
All the voices, so many voices
heed me of my death.

Tumble from the stairs
stumble onto stage
crash into the pole
before their eyes you age.

Shadow all the windows
with the power of a key
lay before the altar
show all they do not see.

Costume after costume
choose a different name
they'll patiently watch you
wait for you to go lame.

Survey the field
go in to kill
lambs to the slaughter
getting all their fill.

Spin in the night
trade little for a dollar
walk the boulevard
silence all that's hollered.

A walk in the park
just another way
curiosity killed the cat
nothing more to say.

Bright lights, bright lights
I no longer want to see.
Rumbling train, rumbling train
you... no more I hear.
Roaring thunder, roaring thunder,
return to me my breath.
All the voices, so many voices
you no longer heed my death.




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Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 01:23:13 AM AEST
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this is great:) reminds me of philadelphia, maybe its the rain & trains... hmm.. warm welcome to ypdc tooo hugs n' love nessa


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 01:38:24 AM AEST
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:) thank you!!!

been to philly in 86
but it's actually about market street in San Francisco


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by Jason_Robert_Britt on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:01:21 AM AEST
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WoW... this is the first poem of yours I've read, and it entices me to read more. This was truely a bright and creative write... I'd comment on a favorite line, but I can't.... it's just that good. Great job...


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 03:32:20 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Nessa is right this reminds me also of Philly are we right??? You drew me right in with this poem i will be watching for more.
Michelle


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 05:41:34 AM AEST
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:) thank you
been to philly though this one is about San Fransisco


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 05:43:17 AM AEST
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thank you... :)
that's encouraging.....
i have too many to post....but this one has been my favorite so far.....


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 08:31:44 AM AEST
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wowa..... GREAT poem!!!!!!


no idea what "before their eyes you age." means though :(


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Friday, 1st August 2003 @ 04:32:13 PM AEST
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you go in innocent and leave aged.....before their eyes.....(does it make sense??)


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 04:49:43 AM AEST
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I was lost in this..reminds me of old black and white movies and...broadway.Im not sure if there as warm as Nessa's but I welcome you with((teddy huggers))) too :)
Very enjoyable read.I'd love to see this as a painting.


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 05:26:07 AM AEST
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thank you.....many of my words have sketches


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 2nd August 2003 @ 04:48:16 PM AEST
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this gaves me the feeling of a dancer, or an artist in some form that watches the wolves at the door waiting their chance to devour. not truely knowing that person.

just my thought, Crow


Re: Market Street La Gal (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:24:45 AM AEST
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crow..........you are so right on target....
market street
san francisco
club la gal




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