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Bloody Tears
Contributed by
RealmX
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Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:22:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel a tear slowly roll down my cheek
Hurt me you have...
But I'm still here
Til that tear drops into nothing
I feel swear beading on my forehead
Cold and refreshing...
Relaxing to my frustration
As my face slowly turns red
I feel blood oozing from my mouth
That taste
Bitter within my mouth
Why did it have to come to this?
All that I've done
All that I've felt
Can all be summed up
With the swelling of my bluish welt
Did you have to hurt me
Did you have to try?
It would be better
If I just wouldn't cry...
Why couldn't you
Just let me be
All that you Wanted
Was to hurt me....
Copyright ©
RealmX
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2003-11-30 13:22:51]
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:31:46 PM AEST
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you capture the pain and sometimes we all feel that way. it's a real good poem and hope to see more of your work.
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by LiveTheDream on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 01:47:12 PM AEST
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| Beautifully written, the words created a very good description for the reader. I too hope to see more of your work. |
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Re: Bloody Tears
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 30th November 2003 @ 10:32:06 PM AEST
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| WELL DONE. |
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