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supermouth
Contributed by
Cancer
on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 01:24:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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you talk, i smile
and pretend to care
but you might as well
not even be there
your tireless mouth
births infinite words
that, for all that they say,
shouldn't even be heard
your endless recital
of knee-slapping anecdotes
leave me longing to simply
tear out your throat
my smile grows more forced
as your monolouge trudges on
your words stay stuck in my head
like a much hated song
story after story
i'm forced to endure
eight inches from my face
your breath smells like manure
if once more i hear the story
of your old basketball goggles
i swear, i'll quit this job
and go back to McDonald's
Copyright ©
Cancer
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2003-12-03 01:24:32]
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Re: supermouth
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by PumpkinPie on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 01:45:08 AM AEST
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Cute poem,made me laugh,keep posting.
~PumpkinPie~ |
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Re: supermouth
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by CrystalSilence on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 05:39:33 AM AEST
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| LMAO!! I know this must be a frustrating time for you and I appreciate the fact that you put it under angry poetry not humorous but I am still lmao at the way you wrote this.Its sooooooo funny.I can imagine you saying this and you wouldnt want me to be around if it were to take proper effect.No insult meant,just that I find it amusing.My kids laugh at me sometimes because of my way with words when Im angered lol...This is a neat piece!!! |
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Re: supermouth
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by LiveTheDream on
Wednesday, 3rd December 2003 @ 04:02:03 PM AEST
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| Brilliantly funny! And i know how you feel to have that one annoying person-well put! |
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Re: supermouth
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 4th December 2003 @ 01:36:21 AM AEST
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lol people like this are fun to mock good poem and I hope u don't have to work with this guy ne more or tell him u need to mull something over and can't do it with his droning on. Something like that :S.
Peace,
Joel (Bob0) |
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