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Conflicting with myself

Contributed by lostinmyself on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:31:35 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I fall into the darkness
And into all the lies,
I'm seeing all the people who I love and I despise,
Many conflicting images swirl inside my head,
And I sit and cry in the middle,
Wishing I was dead.

I'm sick of all the terror,
All the anger and the lies,
All my childish hopes of happiness,
Are lost into the sky,
Disappearing into eternity,
No truth here, only lies,
I just sit and cry in the middle,
Wishing I would die.

I really want to be happy,
But still want to be me,
But I feel so all alone now,
Is there nobody else that sees?

I'm just sitting on the floor and crying over me




Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-12 13:31:35]
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Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by alecfernadez on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:33:41 PM AEST
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I like


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Necromant on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 01:47:50 PM AEST
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Wow, very sad! Understand what you meant. Be strong! Continue writing! ;)

Anne


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 02:02:18 PM AEST
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i under stand you! even if no one else does, because i feel the same pain as you. (my name is deathdrop)


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 04:06:19 PM AEST
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Well done hun! This is brill and i myself have felt the same way too
xxxxx


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 12th January 2004 @ 05:36:24 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, I'm 42 years old and you just described how I feel most of the time.
Incredible!!!!!!!!


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Tuesday, 13th January 2004 @ 08:05:09 PM AEST
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Your poem made me want to cry. It was a great poem, the flow etc but it was incredibly sad and I believe came from your deepest parts. Writing is a great way to vent, please hang in there...

Kie


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Thursday, 22nd January 2004 @ 12:27:04 PM AEST
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This is a good poem with alot of emotion. I liked it. Sometimes you have to make choices albeit hard choices.


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by gery_giggles on Monday, 16th February 2004 @ 09:40:14 PM AEST
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this is how i feel right now!...it really does hurt.
good write
luv always


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th January 2005 @ 12:02:01 PM AEST
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I can so relate to this, at times. It's very expressive, Phil. The last line is especially poignant. Blessings.


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Monday, 28th February 2005 @ 10:23:56 PM AEST
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this was a good first post, phil. i can see that youve really grown as a writer, but since you started off this well, you only could become more brilliant with use of expression. and as for the concept, hopefully there is no more darkness to fall into...


Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 20th November 2005 @ 04:23:44 PM AEST
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Very delicate write here, not very difficult to understand, or perceive, sometimes we can better locate ourselves in those subtle moments, at war within our souls. RL



Re: Conflicting with myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:22:16 AM AEST
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Desperation so well penned. Know that I'm always here.
Take care,
David




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