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Tribute

Contributed by lostinmyself on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 12:10:01 PM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



What would I do if I lost you?
I might just break down and cry,
If you werent in my life anymore,
I might just sit down and die,
If you had chosen another,
After all that we had,
Once we had lost one-another,
Things would start to get bad.

The feeling of losing a part of yourself,
Half of you lost to the winds,
Memories of all the best times,
When we did the most amazing things,
Times we took for granted,
Thinking it would never end,
I feel Ive lost a brother,
Instead of just a friend.

Happy when you were here,
Upset now that youre gone,
I thought we would last forever,
Now Im sad I was wrong.

Its helping just to remember,
All the good times we had,
Though you died last November,
In my memories you will never be dead.

Im glad this is not real,
Just a dream instead,
But if I really lost you,
All these words would be said.

cause this is a tribute,
To a dear, dear friend.




Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2004-01-14 12:10:01]
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Re: Tribute (User Rating: 1 )
by LiveTheDream on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 01:18:53 PM AEST
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Wow i think this ones probs the best so far cos it really flows and u can really understand ur feelings...well done!
xxxx


Re: Tribute (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Wednesday, 14th January 2004 @ 05:36:36 PM AEST
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You made me cry. Still fighting tears and I have read it twice. A beautiful, loving tribute. My heart goes out to you regarding your loss.

Kie


Re: Tribute (User Rating: 1 )
by Cobalt on Tuesday, 27th January 2004 @ 02:14:42 PM AEST
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This was damn good. I enjoyed reading it alot. Very good work and show of emtotions here. It flows very nicely.


Re: Tribute (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Saturday, 1st December 2007 @ 07:58:07 AM AEST
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I didn't know you felt this strongly for me! But seriously, "Half of you lost to the winds" is one of the most beautiful lines I've heard in a long time. As in all our early ones, rhyming does seem forced, but still good, nonetheless.
Take care,
David




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