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smothered
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:15:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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do you remember how we used to be? to me there was only you, and to you there was only me, and now things are different, and i cant explain, why it pains me to see us this way. i used to tell you everything, now we both tell only lies, our friendship is in the darkness, it makes me want to cry, the love we had is cruel now, hearts smothered in our lies, what happened to our friendship? it turned around and died.
will it ever be like it was?
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Re: smothered
(User Rating: 1 ) by hawaii06 on
Saturday, 24th January 2004 @ 12:18:38 PM AEST (User
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This is sad...and I can see where you're coming from..I like this poem a lot..and I hope to see more from you soon...
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Re: smothered
(User Rating: 1 ) by LiveTheDream on
Sunday, 25th January 2004 @ 02:10:18 PM AEST (User
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Aw im so sorry hun i guess things didnt work out but that doesnt mean they wont in the future, keep trying...for now keep up the good writing!
nat xx |
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Re: smothered
(User Rating: 1 ) by Stitch on
Thursday, 18th March 2004 @ 08:07:31 AM AEST (User
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Oh, I really like this. I love the lines about love being cruel and these two:
i used to tell you everything,
now we both tell only lies,
You have captured that time in a relationship when it has been coming apart and no one wants to admit it. Good stuff.
Stitch
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