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Red Snow
Contributed by
liquidchaos
on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:47:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The cold extends it's arms
Invites me into it's grasp
A welcome feeling of belonging
A new experience.
The cold washes over me in waves
Like warm waves of an ocean
Dulling the senses
Numbing the extremeties
The cold envelops me
Like coveted hugs
Smothering me
Completing the process I have begun.
The snow bleeds red
My life pours from my arms
No feeling remains
Only harsh memories.
The sights before me fade
As blackness ensues
With my one final breath
I remember only regrets.
Many ghastly errors made
Show only the nature of the human way.
Copyright ©
liquidchaos
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2004-03-17 12:47:35]
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Re: Red Snow
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by gothicangel on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:00:43 PM AEST
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| This is a really great poem! it gave me the goose pimples! lol! Sad, but true! |
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Re: Red Snow
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:15:03 PM AEST
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| it's beautiful in it's own way... i like... |
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Re: Red Snow
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by deathdrop on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:15:24 PM AEST
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| it's beautiful in it's own way... i like... |
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Re: Red Snow
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by ChaosBound on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:52:48 PM AEST
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This is one of the best poems i have ever read, so much power in so few words my goddess this is pure beauty...
Thank you.
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Re: Red Snow
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by justjames on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 07:57:43 PM AEST
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| this is the greatest poem i've read on here, it's really powerful |
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