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stand under the moon light...

Contributed by saha on Saturday, 3rd April 2004 @ 04:43:20 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Stand under the moonlight
On a hill of memories
Face to face with my mystakes
I feel no sorrow

I have never feel alive
At the same time I feel so alone
I wish I could change my life

Alone...
Make another step all alone
So when you're saying that
You don't know how to live
I can say only that
I don't know it as well.




Copyright © saha ... [ 2004-04-03 16:43:20]
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Re: stand under the moon light... (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 8th April 2004 @ 04:52:26 AM AEST
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no problem..we can live..if there is some mon light.
venkat


Re: stand under the moon light... (User Rating: 1 )
by Mihiri on Friday, 16th April 2004 @ 11:45:20 AM AEST
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Hmmn, it's rather closed-in and non-interactive, but all the while, it intrigued me sooooooo much! I think it's a good poem for releasing one's thoughts [which can sometimes be complicated!]
Mihiri


Re: stand under the moon light... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 19th April 2004 @ 08:27:26 AM AEST
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I felt the second stanza was a little awry

"I have never feel alive"

Does this mean "I have never felt so alive" or "I have never felt alive"? This is confusing slightly. Also you spelled mistakes incorrectly in the first . . . apart from those two issues, however, I found this an intriguing and personal write, which used an inspirational setting to imbue the thoughts and emotions conveyed via the third and final stanza.

Interesting poem.
Keep writing.




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