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Can't Be Anything
Contributed by
essentially9
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Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 09:46:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Can't Be Anything This will catch your eye As it caught my eye Source divine I could be wrong again But I see...now That with every beginning There is an ending There is no point to anything You can't be anything Not even a father To me, your poor little daughter You can't be anything And neither can I You took everything from me You took everything about me You took my life from me And I have to start over You gave me life Just to give me strife You gave me spite With my malice I will ignite You can't be anything You can't catch a glimpse And you won't catch my eye For I only see through lies That I believed true You'll never be anything Because your life is ending This will catch your eye As it caught my eye But only we will know The story behind This web of lies
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Re: Can't Be Anything
(User Rating: 0 ) by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:00:41 AM AEST (User
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I think you need a hug hun |
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Re: Can't Be Anything
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 10:14:36 AM AEST (User
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i wonder did you give this to him... i sit and think of so many things, your poem is very moving, am here if you need or want to talk, big hugs and love nessa |
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Re: Can't Be Anything
(User Rating: 1 ) by mickie on
Wednesday, 28th April 2004 @ 11:05:46 AM AEST (User
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listen, i know the feeling. my dad has not talked to me since i was 12yrs. old. he left my mom and remarried. i understand from my uncle that he's sick. i really wish i could understand his actions and why he did what he did. i just wish he would help my babay brother. i cannot believe how selfish people
are. you be encouraged and keep it real and keep in touch with me. i will tell you more about myself, okay? |
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Re: Can't Be Anything
(User Rating: 1 ) by ForeverAlone on
Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 11:16:58 PM AEST (User
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Wow..Jen...I love this poem..the rhthem and rhyme scheme is awesome, and very powerful
Clark |
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