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rain turns to tears
Contributed by
lexxie
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Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:32:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
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i feel the pain inside
emotion is creeping out from under the covers
it feels as if im going to explode into a million pieces
my heart's beating
your voice hurts
you keep on talking
repeating yourself like a broken record
everything you say your voice filling me with pain
everything you say is going threw one ear and out the other
and the only thing i can hear is I HATE YOU!
screaming at me like you have before
your cold voice is like ice
filling me with hate pain anger
i know how you feel you've said it many times before
your voice suddunlly drops
like the rain
i can hear it in my ears
i can hear my tears
i'd give anything for it to be like it use to be
i watch the rain like you watch my tears
you like to see me hurt
to seem e fear
you got want you want i'm hurting inside!
and now my life's fears are being exsposed
and the window is slowly closeing
folding like a broken heart
like my heart
and the pain i feel is like you shooting at my heart
just looking to hurt me
to kill me inside
now watch me cut myself wide open
eyes closed
heart exsposed
this isent the frist time and im sure this isent the last
im never going to stop crying and the rains never going to stop pouring
pouring out my pain
now my pain is just a beatuiful tragedy
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lexxie
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2004-05-15 18:32:42]
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Re: rain turns to tears
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by xsweet_temptaznx on
Saturday, 15th May 2004 @ 06:39:17 PM AEST
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awww...i know how u feel..like a week ago i was going threw the same thing...life just sucks..but we all learn to live with it...sooner or later things will begin to get better..and if they dont just be happy its not gonna get worse..cuz it sounds like u got it hella bad..but loved the poem keep it up ;)!
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Re: rain turns to tears
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by MoonlitAngel on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 03:48:13 AM AEST
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Love it. I completely relate.
~ Moonlit |
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Re: rain turns to tears
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by JT on
Sunday, 16th May 2004 @ 08:28:14 AM AEST
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| baring a broken heart for all to see. write through the pain. goodluck |
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Re: rain turns to tears
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by Wachumiri on
Monday, 24th May 2004 @ 04:26:48 PM AEST
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"i can hear my tears"
I love that line. It's a really good poem, you express yourself very well.
Take care.
David |
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