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IT
Contributed by
xlooseroftomorrowx
on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 09:34:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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if i could change what you did to her
change what you put her through
if i could make someone else feel the pain that she feels
i would make it you
you did this to her.
you brought her down
now upon her beautiful face she always wears a frown
she didnt deserve it
noone ever does
now shes stuck with you
and youll never get enough
pleasure from her pain
you raped her
violated her
confused her
misused her
broke her
and took her and made her your own
she doesnt belong to you
let her go
she doesnt deserve this kind of abuse..
im begging you
let her go
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xlooseroftomorrowx
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2004-07-24 09:34:01]
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Re: IT
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by Mihiri on
Saturday, 24th July 2004 @ 10:20:08 AM AEST
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| U seem very concerned bout someone, u must be a very close friend. Well written, Loads'a crazZzy grins, Mihiri |
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Re: IT
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by ChinaRivera on
Sunday, 25th July 2004 @ 03:34:35 AM AEST
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| Whoa! This was dramatic! I mean that in a good way! ;-) Im sensitive, so i think my heart almost stopped with those words! Dang! I need a drink! ;-) ha ha! I wonder who you are talking about in your poem or is this just a poem? mmm? Anyway, if you are talking about anyone specific, then i hope that the person you are talking about is O K now! Your poem hit home! Goodluck to the people who are close to your heart. May God bless you. peace & love -China |
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