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MOMMY

Contributed by Alina on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 03:52:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



mommy why did you
hurt me
why did you make me cry
why did you loose me
and leave me here to die
you were supposed
to save me
but you watched
me drown in pain
now I'm nothing
my blood washes down like rain !!




Copyright © Alina ... [ 2004-08-02 15:52:57]
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Re: MOMMY (User Rating: 1 )
by Katie2008 on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:03:27 PM AEST
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I liked this poem a lot. I hope brighter days will come for you. Nice write.
Katie


Re: MOMMY (User Rating: 1 )
by Stew on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 05:14:51 PM AEST
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I love this poem. It says so much in so little words. I hope better days come to you. Read some of mine.

Love Forever
Stew


Re: MOMMY (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Monday, 2nd August 2004 @ 07:13:31 PM AEST
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I love how you captured the essence of the child that you were. It sounds like the words of a child who cannot understand why they have to deal with this pain. I hope that you are happy now, inspite of the pain that you have experienced in the past.


Re: MOMMY (User Rating: 1 )
by deathdrop on Friday, 27th August 2004 @ 03:57:42 PM AEST
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i really like the way you've written this to rhyme like you have.
this poem is excellent!


Re: MOMMY (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Thursday, 16th September 2004 @ 11:54:48 PM AEST
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I liked this poem but we need to grow up sometimes but I would love to have my mom always shes my best friend




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