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Insomnia

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 07:17:09 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Empty.
A cold, barren desert, this hole inside of me
Nothing flows through my veins except pain, despair, and lies
And the bed yawns sleepily, waiting for an occupant
But I dare not sacrifice myself
Sleep is where the Hell begins
These horrid nightmares, full of demons, hatred, you
I gaze into your seemingly endless eyes,
And I am consumed by you
I fall once again, and think to myself,
"Stupid! Mindless idiot! How can you let yourself get into this again? Youve been through this many times before!"
I nod my head,
I dont want to fight with myself again
I wallow in it,
Your boundless sea of hate, masochistic pain, and insanity
The persistent waves torrent over my head,
And I slowly drown, again
I sink lower every waking moment,
Contemplating how we came to this
This world of putrid malevolence
I am the slave to the Creator
I am adhered to the statue of my Master, with profound chains
Am I ever to be free?
Will this ever end?
Ebony tears of guilt, sins, and anguish flush out of my eyes like a perpetually running faucet
And you laugh, my love,
Oh, how you laugh!!!
You love to see me lose again,
You love to watch me suffer
You love to use me as your marionette
And I obey, every single demand
Death seems so much sweeter to my ears now
Let it come, I greet it with open arms
But as your poison lips part from mine,
And you lick my blood off your mouth,
Savoring it like priceless wine,
I realize with revulsion,
YOU are my Death





Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2004-08-05 07:17:09]
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Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:03:33 AM AEST
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WOW!!


Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by jenny21614 on Thursday, 5th August 2004 @ 11:07:13 AM AEST
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Great write~


Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Monday, 9th August 2004 @ 04:47:09 PM AEST
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DAMN! This is great! Don't really know what to say....There are some great lines in this....

I fall once again, and think to myself,
"Stupid! Mindless idiot! How can you let yourself get into this again? You’ve been through this many times before!"
I nod my head,
I don’t want to fight with myself again…
I wallow in it,

I love this because I can totally see myself in your place, and I can feel this. I don't want to repeat myself, but I must say that I love your writing. It's unique, original, heartfelt, and true. I love how you let your words flow, because nothing is forced here, it is all natural and true. Again, thank you, and keep writing.

Be True,
zenmind


Re: Insomnia (User Rating: 1 )
by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 8th September 2004 @ 06:23:07 PM AEST
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My heart cries out for the pain and hopelessness that you portray within these words...Oh but if there was a way to to set you free of the pain and memories...

Another powerfully emotional write that grips the reader and draws them into you

Nazmythian ~




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