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Who Am I
Contributed by
jewelry726
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Thursday, 18th July 2002 @ 09:26:01 PM in AEST
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Who am I?
A strong woman of pride,I search to find peace of mind. So much work to do who will balance my load? So much to learn, what else could go wrong
so many things I don't understand, how will I conduct a plan
still I believe in gods unchanging hand
my minds a battlefield, filled with clutter
feel my pain
my hurt
the lies
through it all I still seek to be wise
feel my pain
watch me break the barriers
accelerate my mind create better times
seat me on my throne, roll out the red carpet the queen is home
place down my rose pedals
for I have grown
the winds can not devour my strong tour
I trust god and his mighty power
Who am I?
I am lovely
I am happiness
I am sadness
I am forgiving
I am faithfulness
I am all that I need to be
Who am I ?
forever changing
I am a river that runs deep.extending even into the creeks
I am a mountian oh so high, feel my breeze passing by, so honest and free
I am a tree ,grab hold to my brance and take a rest
I am the organizer of my life where peace
-vs- strife never seize to fight
I am a survior, persistent in my ways
I will never give up until the end of my days
Thats me a woman of pride that holds her head up.
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jewelry726
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Re: Who Am I
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by humphdj on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 01:00:11 AM AEST
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This is very refreshing...so much determination pours out of this.......brilliant!
Good write
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Re: Who Am I
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by jewelry726 on
Friday, 19th July 2002 @ 04:21:04 AM AEST
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| thank you very much. I didn't no what to expect it was my first poem |
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Re: Who Am I
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by jewelry726 on
Monday, 22nd July 2002 @ 06:03:30 PM AEST
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Re: Who Am I
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by Chrissie on
Thursday, 25th July 2002 @ 04:22:13 AM AEST
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This is wonderful and so inspiring...I love it, well done.
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by Kassidi on
Friday, 26th July 2002 @ 02:44:26 AM AEST
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This was so inspiring. So wonderful! It left me speechless....
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Re: Who Am I
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by sweetolbaby on
Thursday, 7th November 2002 @ 04:37:02 AM AEST
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This is what I call, An inspirational poem. I really love it. My mother was a single mother when she had me at the tender age of 18 and struggled with me. I think if this poem was out when she had me because it would tell her to keep her head up. A good write
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Re: Who Am I
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by jewelry726 on
Saturday, 9th November 2002 @ 03:39:51 AM AEST
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| thank you for your comment, because its a struggle trying to make it as a single mom. It takes a strong woman to make it in this tough world. |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Ilhar on
Saturday, 14th December 2002 @ 05:47:07 PM AEST
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| very strong message it was well wriiten thank you for sharing |
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Re: Who Am I
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by BeautifulRainbow on
Wednesday, 5th March 2003 @ 12:09:54 PM AEST
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| nice job, well written... |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Krazykaric on
Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 02:04:05 AM AEST
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| Powerful write!! Very inspiring! |
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Re: Who Am I
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by lovingcritters on
Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:38:18 AM AEST
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I could relate to your poem. So well written. I too was a mother of 3 all alone, worked two jobs many times.
The first thing I learned was when I got out of bed in the morning, I already had 10 strikes against me, so had better nip everything in the bud....there's no back up for we single Moms!
Sounds like you are doing great! Keep up the good work, and never lose hope!
Warm and encouraging hugs!
loving critters
Connie Sue
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by GODSBESTIMAGE on
Saturday, 20th March 2004 @ 10:39:10 PM AEST
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WONDERFUL POEM.
IT'S LET'S US KNOW THAT US SINGLE WOMEN WITH CHILDREN STRUGGLING CAN MAKE IT WITH THE GRACE OF GOD.
LIFE CAN BE MEAN BUT GOD CAN TURN THE BAD THINGS INTO GOOD THINGS. THANK GOD THAT HE WAS THERE FOR US. BECAUSE SOMETIMES OUR OWN FAMILIES IGNORE US OR TREAT US BAD. BUT GOD CARES, NO MATTER WHO WE ARE.
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Re: Who Am I
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by Nickibabe421 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 03:58:36 PM AEST
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Oh My God, I cant even put my thoughts into words. That was awsome. I see my Mom through that poem. She is a very strong woman. I love this poem. Keep up the good work! :)
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Re: Who Am I
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by Mihiri on
Tuesday, 5th October 2004 @ 10:42:23 AM AEST
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Excellent!! This is just what I needed at the end of the day! I was feeling rather down 'coz I always seem to ravel myself in pity & regrets, but glad 2 know that there ARE ppl whom I thought couldn't exist in the wolrd nowadays! Hope there's more of you out there!!
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by mickie on
Tuesday, 26th October 2004 @ 11:09:17 AM AEST
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this is a very refreshing and energizing poem. i feel that way so many times. u should keep in touch with me if you can.
good write and keep it up!!! |
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Re: Who Am I
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by Craze on
Tuesday, 1st August 2006 @ 01:50:24 PM AEST
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| this poem is kinda dum |
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Re: Who Am I
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by lipsofanangel on
Tuesday, 17th October 2006 @ 08:11:46 AM AEST
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This poem has a story behind it that wants to be told, but you dont tell it.
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Re: Who Am I
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by JamesStockdale on
Thursday, 24th January 2019 @ 10:35:08 PM AEST
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| Made me emotional. God Bless You! |
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Re: Who Am I
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by thelaststraw on
Thursday, 16th May 2019 @ 05:04:40 PM AEST
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| Depth within a poem very well done. I like the style and the constant reminder of Who am I. Only thing I would suggest is not pertaining to one gender but that may take away from the depth just a thought. |
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