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The Smoking Dis-ease

Contributed by SWCSuzyQ on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:12:27 PM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff



There once was a time. It was considered cool
But in time was becoming, An unfashionable tool

It was positively wonderful, It was just the thing to do
I really wasn't born this way, It was something to ensue

Yes, we all have our habits, In one way or another
But it also boils down to, Please don't judge your brother

It's easy to get started, But very hard to depart
For the reason's it is used, Are entwined in the heart

Killing doesn't always come, From using cars or a gun
But can easily happen, From the wagging of the tongue

I have seen scrunched up faces, And waving hands in the air
And heard many deadly things, Without any care

Words truly have great power, So they can heal or destroy
So let's make some changes, From both sides I employ

Smokers be considerate, Remaining always aware
Don't receive the negative, Rebuke feelings of despair

And on the opposite hand, All of you who do not smoke
I'd appreciate it greatly, If you'd quit pretending to choke

You can help oh so much more, If you knew just what to do
By speaking life to my life, I understand your side too

Just a plain simple request, Will eventually transmit
By saying life to your life, I'm sure someday you'll quit




Copyright © SWCSuzyQ ... [ 2004-11-16 20:12:27]
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Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by Suz on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:14:58 PM AEST
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second that


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by Luinil on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:16:18 PM AEST
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ha awesome poem*


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:16:31 PM AEST
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I really like this. It has a nice flow and I like the way it all came together at the end. Great job!


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:52:49 PM AEST
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Nicely done......I hope I am able to quit soon...
Jenni


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by kori31 on Tuesday, 16th November 2004 @ 08:57:07 PM AEST
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hell yeah, very well said!


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by givingin on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 08:25:25 AM AEST
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very good way to get your point across!
GREAT JOB!
*~givingin~~*


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by rhymeandreason on Wednesday, 17th November 2004 @ 05:31:33 PM AEST
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Hey sweetie!
Glad to see you're putting down your rhymes, and prose for the world to see. I thought that you might like this site.
I liked this one. Most people do quit eventually. At the time that seems proper to them. Or maybe, at that time in their life that they can no longer justify continuing the habit.
Anyway, good write.
I'll talk to you on the round-a-bout. R& R


Re: The Smoking Dis-ease (User Rating: 1 )
by afterdark on Thursday, 27th January 2005 @ 08:21:24 PM AEST
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This makes me wanna smoke a third pack today..




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