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rubbing
Contributed by
briefcircle
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Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:24:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Answer her questions with a question, Never make a confession, shell always be guessing, and you can teach her a lesson. About how your mind works, shell act out her aggression, her feelings contradict her facial expressions.
You tell her that you want to breed, you make her sacrifice your seed. Even though you once agreed, being childish exceeds the deed, but you held half her hand and watched her bleed. Stuck with it through the poverty, a credit card payed shopping spree. Oh what a tangled web we weave, but you promised her youd never leave... she thinks about you, new years eve. The pleasure ended in the pain She counts the days that youve been gone
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Re: rubbing
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenmind on
Monday, 13th December 2004 @ 02:39:48 PM AEST (User
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I like your voice. You express yourself truly within your poetry. there is a lot of honesty that comes through. Good stuff. This poem has a little too much rhyming for me, but I liked how honest you were in this one. Also I like your screen name....simple, but profound in some way.....
Be True,
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