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Did I Say That Out Loud

Contributed by Nazmythian on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:00:04 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

We were sittin
In a restrant
After dinner
Over coffee
When she told me
Of a poem
She had written
Just today

And the words fell
Down like honey
As she whispered
`Cross the table
And I thought that
I could love her
Thats when I heard
Myself say

Did I say that out loud
Was it just in my head
Can they be taken back
If you dont hear them said
When they fall on deaf ears
Do they still make a sound
Do the words even count
Did I say that out loud


We were standing
At the altar
And the preacher
He was speaking
Words of wisdom
And devotion
And of never
Ending love

Now I so hate
To admit it
But I made him
Ask me twice if
I would take her
As my wife, `cuz
I was thinking
I should run

Did I say that out loud
Was it just in my head
Can they be taken back
If you dont hear them said
When they fall on deaf ears
Do they still make a sound
Do the words even count
Did I say that out loud


I spoke the words
And slipped the ring
On her finger
Before I knew
I heard a soft
And quiet voice
Slowly saying
Yes I do

And I said that out loud
It wasnt just in my head
And I cant take it back
Because God heard it said
And I swore Id be with her
`Least until she was dead
Did that come from my mouth
Did I say that out loud

Did I say that out loud
Was it just in my head
Can they be taken back
If you dont hear them said
When they fall on deaf ears
Do they still make a sound
Do the words even count
Did I say that out loud


~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~




Copyright © Nazmythian ... [ 2005-02-16 16:00:04]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Jezabel on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:03:24 PM AEST
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interesting luv. good write


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by bethie on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:07:23 PM AEST
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ha ha . Good one.


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Stitch on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:28:41 PM AEST
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One of your best...and ...ONCE AGAIN...somehow reminiscent of
Meatloaf.
Stitch
(who just has to love Nazzy's writes)


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by xXcrossedXx on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:32:37 PM AEST
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I thought this was excellent, I think these are the lyrics you've been searching for. Romantic in a way, beatutiful, Great Job.


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by vibes2go on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 04:45:06 PM AEST
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this was soooo great..it should be published..it should be sung.. it's really great..I'm loving every moment of it..every word.. (did I say that..or am I just thinking it???)


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 05:01:36 PM AEST
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Yeah, I ditto Stitch, it does somehow sound like something he would write. Very good write though. Muy Bien!


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 07:14:21 PM AEST
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I thought the first two stanzas were the best.


We were sittin’
In a rest’rant
After dinner
Over coffee
When she told me
Of a poem
She had written
Just today

I liked the "rest' rant" part. I thought it was clever because it shows how restraunts are places where we meet with our friends and rant. Coffee and cigerrettes.....nothing beats it.

And the words fell
Down like honey
As she whispered
`Cross the table
And I thought that
I could love her
That’s when I heard
Myself say

I thought this part flowed very nicely. For some reason, the "And I thought that I could love her" part really struck me. It was as if, when I was reading it, I could see your mind work in that particular moment. It felt alive like it was happening now. I don't know if I'm making sense, but it just came across like it was supposed to be said there....perfectly placed.

Good story telling in this poem.

Be True,
zenmind


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 16th February 2005 @ 07:54:26 PM AEST
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i think I speak for everyone here when I say that THIS ROCKS!!! or ballads, whichever you prefer


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 05:24:11 AM AEST
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Ohh why does this song remind me of something?

* Pauses *

Anyways i really liked it Nazzy, it's ver strong and deep, It's gonna be in my head all day if only i had some music with it.

Hugs,
Jane ^_^


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by lostinmyself on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 08:19:17 AM AEST
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*grins*
You know I love this, right?

I gotta say though, I think I love the verses better then the chorus. But I think that's just me.

Great write hunni.

*hugs you tight* Phil xxx


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Willofree on Thursday, 17th February 2005 @ 12:01:48 PM AEST
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Naz, I really liked it....excellant lyrics. Interestingly, I never read the words; but from the beginning I sang them, and was aware of a rhythum and cadence of my own.

Great job
Willofree, Terry



Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 18th February 2005 @ 10:44:31 AM AEST
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AAHHH!!!!! You did this with great finese!!!
Its so light and refreshing yet has those dreaded undertones. Well blended good sir and well written!!!!!!


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by the_Ghost_Moth on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 05:31:25 PM AEST
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Another great write, pumpkin.

--Ghosty


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Tuesday, 22nd February 2005 @ 07:36:44 PM AEST
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*applauds*

This is a great song. The opening is really rather beautiful, at least to me (as one who wouldn't mind being the singer one bit), and it's carried through. Bravo!

Andrew
(reading good poems today)


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 24th February 2005 @ 07:42:40 PM AEST
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LMAO!!! This is so cute and yet, has its heartfelt times!! Humorous and serious at the same time! LOVE IT!! I should be ashamed of myself for not commenting sooner! I was missing out! lol. Beautiful, enchanting, and hilarious! Excellent combinations, cheri! I enjoyed this one alot! The extended time adn patience on writing this masterpiece truly shines, cheri. Your talent shall never fade. All my love. Forever,

Votre fleur de bonheur. *Stephy*


Re: Did I Say That Out Loud (User Rating: 1 )
by junior on Thursday, 3rd March 2005 @ 12:44:55 AM AEST
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well I have heard you time and time again say these words to me and I have to respond, YES YOU DID!!! Sometimes those words are needed to be said and other times I wish you had never said them to where I could hear. But I will tell you this Nazy don't you ever forget you are a great person and I will always be around for you even if you do say some things outload




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