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the sky holds the moon;
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Monday, 7th March 2005 @ 12:17:56 AM in AEST
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the sky holds the moon; but in all things remember
that which is new is old; one of many stories told (so
write a tale in which you cannot fail; and remember to forget nothing of why; suprisingly nothing)
and in all things remember; engraven flowers dont wither (the rain is a blind trigger
of warm embrace counting stars held in hours;
hours of rememberance
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2005-03-07 00:17:56] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: the sky holds the moon;
(User Rating: 1 ) by zenmind on
Friday, 11th March 2005 @ 05:29:08 PM AEST (User
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This poem captures the feeling of eternity. "That which is old is new"---I loved that---this poem felt very reflective, like you were reflecting on the feeling of life itself. Very impactful. And again, I find that I wish I had more to say, but I feel that all that should be said, you have already expressed, and if I were to say more, then I would ruin what is. Again, very impressive. I loved it.
Be True,
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