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blooming
Contributed by
electrique_poet
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Monday, 21st March 2005 @ 11:18:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
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blooming
petals curl
up to the sky
in a lie
within the
souls of beautiful
girls;
beautiful girls of
paltry grace
today;
no way
i say
no way;
gray clouds look on
water still
leaves as hands
springtime invites
no way;
they say
today and never and ever;
no longer i resist)
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Re: blooming
(User Rating: 1 )
by zenmind on
Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 04:27:07 PM AEST
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I really liked this one too.....very abstract, yet detailed. Also the "no longer I resit" ending caught my attention. I identify with that feeling.
Be True,
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Re: blooming
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by Drapes on
Saturday, 11th March 2006 @ 10:48:52 AM AEST
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Nice. It's interesting. Good job!
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