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Your Last Smile

Contributed by pixie on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:19:36 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Your last smile was given to me,
Just for a moment you broke free,
Free from all your pain,
You looked so happy once again.

I wish your smile was forever,
I cant believe Ill see you never,
You didnt deserve to suffer,
Now youre placed under Angels cover.

Your smile Ill always remember,
From January through til December,
I can still see your face,
You are a memory time cant erase.

What Id give just to hold your hand,
Walk next to you in Gods land,
Hold you close tell you its alright,
Reassuring you never will you have to fight.

Your last smile is forever in my heart,
And although death has tore us apart,
Never will you leave my thoughts,
Eternally in my heart youve been caught.




Copyright © pixie ... [ 2005-07-07 17:19:36]
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Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:31:05 PM AEST
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Your writing has always been excellent. And this was no exception.

Miss all your works Kirssie.

Jane xx


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:06:08 PM AEST
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Aww this is beautiful...Made me think of my own Nan and how much she meant to me. Great write Pix...

Scorp.


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by jyssvw22 on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:39:39 PM AEST
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this is a realy nice and just a great poem...

thanks for sharing



Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:42:45 PM AEST
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I am sorry for your loss. This is a beautiful poem.

Take care.

Scott


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:43:21 PM AEST
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Awww pixie..I know how much you must miss her... Lovely tribute to your Nan..
Hugs
Jenni


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:38:40 PM AEST
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beautiful poem my dear friend I am sorry for
your loss, but she isn't feeling any more pain.
I thought this poem was very touching and it
was good to stumble across one of your
writes... it is good to know you are safe after
today's bombings in London. Hope to talk to
you soon.

Hugs,
Joel


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:12:54 AM AEST
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Beautiful and heart warming pix, one may

leave but they never realy go away, lovely

as always . . . ((((((((pixie))))))))))

Ben


Re: Your Last Smile (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Tuesday, 12th July 2005 @ 11:09:43 PM AEST
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=] wonder poem, a wonderful read. youve outdone yourself as you do with every piece filled with emotion, a rarity for some writers, but never for you.




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