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To run free
Contributed by
mindset
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Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 05:31:44 PM in AEST
Topic:
secrets
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A word of many years roamed free to create a brilliance
As we are young we grow older and yet we dont know
Our firends our family fresh but only sold
We create our vision on what we see fit
And yet we only be what they only see
Is it time now to create the freedom what we always expect
Or are we lost and puppets their pets
Words of wisdon soul respect
Every day we live our lives and we just expect
To find the words that will free the intent
Look at us dying in our only flow
Our problem is we used to know
Years are like the days before and yet nothing unfolds
They before us spoke the words of pure flight
Why we choose to ground in all our fight
I look at the female as male only see's
I see beauty and freedom and all that expires
Why so far and yet we travel together
I see the war of yesterday a letter unsent
And yet a post of year never sent
Those above us our rulers our mind seekers
They tell us every day that we is yesterday
And why we sit and listen when we is all the same
I wait for you to speak the real word
A jail we live and freedom awaits
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mindset
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2005-07-07 17:31:44]
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Re: To run free
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by Spazzo on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 06:37:37 PM AEST
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This is a neat poem.
Scott |
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Re: To run free
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 04:59:06 AM AEST
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We create our vison as to what we see fit
great line very deep
simply yet complex
your vison on this poem
fits very well as to what i see fit |
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