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Feel Me
Contributed by
pUnKa_RaCh
on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:13:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Eyes that never leave mine
It is I you want tonight
Like a black and white movie
Just the two of us
Under the moonlight…
The one you long for
Whom you hold so dear
Hides a sad secret
I am not what I appear
Silent screams that linger…
Happiness I have not found…
Too scared to tell you…
Frightened to even utter a sound…
Whilst touching my lips
You aren’t feeling the real me
I pretend even in front of you
I am not who you see
I wish I could tell you…
Cause you to feel all I feel…
So you can hold me closer…
To know that you are real…
Don’t look away now
Squeeze me into your mold
Even though I’m withholding
Private truth that is untold
I am sorry precious love
It hurts too much to say
With any fulfilling words
How my soul does always lay
So for now
Place my heart against your chest
So as to obtain
The way it does beat
In such hushed and bitter pain
Do you feel me?
I hope you feel me….
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pUnKa_RaCh
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Re: Feel Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:26:05 PM AEST
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| This was a very good poem, I liked the words you used, crawled inside me and grabbed my heart as well, SLipSiX>. |
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Re: Feel Me
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by bgj on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 09:43:58 PM AEST
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I like it. Good job!
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Re: Feel Me
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:44:32 PM AEST
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I like it alot
very good job |
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Re: Feel Me
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by MorningDove on
Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 10:52:48 PM AEST
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Such aching need. This is so real and emotional. Splendid work,
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Re: Feel Me
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by wizard on
Friday, 8th July 2005 @ 10:41:02 AM AEST
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nice write..it sounds to my as though you're longing for love, but afraid to let anyone into your heart.
let him in!
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Re: Feel Me
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by Man_On_High on
Saturday, 9th July 2005 @ 01:49:00 AM AEST
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I agree with wiz..
maybe you should let him IN..
he may want all you have to offer..
but who knows if he can-
Truth in saddness...this write : (
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Re: Feel Me
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by Pyrochick on
Tuesday, 27th December 2005 @ 01:54:16 AM AEST
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| I loved how words you chose for this. it was really good. |
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