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desolence unending
Contributed by
cooley1818
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Friday, 29th July 2005 @ 11:18:33 PM in AEST
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harder we try
the further we fall
searching for a path
down this long winding road
through out this destiny
were bound to find
these obsticals we meet
and the sun that shines
the deeper we fall
the colder it gets
but any colder
and this love will never fix
remember my love
i will never fall astray
if we fall apart
then just look my way
reach for my hand
as i would yours
but hold on tight
i wont lose you this time
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cooley1818
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2005-07-29 23:18:33]
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Re: desolence unending
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by vibes2go on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 03:40:31 AM AEST
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but hold on tight
i wont lose you this time
simply lines to rejoice over... |
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Re: desolence unending
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by Somnium on
Sunday, 2nd April 2006 @ 02:54:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem,
"through out this destiny
were bound to find
these obsticals we meet
and the sun that shines"
Fantasic lines, nice way of talking about the obstacles in a positive way and giving the beautiful contrast of the sun that shines. Also lines to rejoice over!
Ben |
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Re: desolence unending
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 01:59:04 AM AEST
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