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Somethings missing
Contributed by
wikedladi
on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:02:37 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Im lossing sight of why i try
I give you all i can possibly give
But somethings always more important
I sit around and wonder why?
What can i do to catch your eye
Ive tried many things, but none suceed
So what shall i do...
I know things change, and people grow
But all i want is you... is it to much to show?
I cant help but wonder will it be the same
Or will it all fail, an continue on this lame
I know your love is true
But busy youve become
An i...
I have nothing to do.
I cant be like you
We are not just the same
So what shall i do?
Ask my heart to be tame?
This love i have is strong
But lonely i do feel
We been together so long
I know not how to deal
I ask you only to share some
Trying hard to hide my hate
So busy you've become
For now i sit and wait
I know i can't have you all the time
But my heart still aches, when you are far
I wish, oh wish, oh shooting star...
Bring him back to me
The way we were in days gone by
So we can be, just he and I
In times back when our heatrs did fly
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wikedladi
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2005-08-16 01:02:37]
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Re: Somethings missing
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by holderofthestone on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 01:53:02 AM AEST
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| its tough to spend time away from the one you care about... i can really ralate with your feelings here. your love shines through with the strong words you use. yet another great write! A++++ |
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Re: Somethings missing
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:45:21 AM AEST
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| Very sad and realistic write about the way a relationship evolves. Many times it seems that pain and love are so intertwined you can't separate one from the other. Great write. |
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