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Deformed Heart

Contributed by anitajames on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 09:26:59 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



You want too much love
I don't have it to give.
Can't you see that I need it?
I'm dying to live.
When love means you taking
I can't get my breath.
Who knew that I love you
could scare me to death.
His love is unselfish, he gives and he gives
Your love is too desparate
an emotional abyss.




Copyright © anitajames ... [ 2005-08-16 09:26:59]
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Re: Deformed Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Faddy on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 10:11:29 AM AEST
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really pretty sounding poem, almost eerie like. i loved it, i feel the same way.. i think..

-fadtastic


Re: Deformed Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on Tuesday, 16th August 2005 @ 11:50:51 AM AEST
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When love becomes a obsession n desperate....ya might wanna wonder about it.
Love comes natural, love isnt to be forced upon or from someone. If it doesnt come natural, it aint real love... Might sound a bit harsh....but I speak from experience.

Very lovely write this......a strong line that... I'm dying to live......

Huggsss,

Nats.


Re: Deformed Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Sunday, 18th September 2005 @ 06:24:12 AM AEST
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I'll echo the comment about that line, it was good.
Love should never take away, it should always give. Maybe the title could have been 'Deformed Love'.
Take care.
David




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