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Closed
Contributed by
ivy
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Saturday, 10th September 2005 @ 10:58:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Tears won't stop coming,
My belief has deceived me.
Thoughts have given way,
I don't want to live this way.
Happiness won't touch me anymore,
Life has become a sore.
I feel drained out,
Hollow from inside.
All good things seem to be a mirage,
I feel am closed in a garage.
No where to go,
There is not even a ray of hope.
I have lost everything I had,
Now I want to close these chapters of Happiness, Hope and Desire.
Copyright ©
ivy
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2005-09-10 10:58:25]
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Re: Closed
(User Rating: 1 )
by heartquake on
Sunday, 11th September 2005 @ 06:40:04 PM AEST
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| good write... very powerful |
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Re: Closed
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by Damien on
Monday, 12th September 2005 @ 11:44:03 PM AEST
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| Wonderful write again, but plz dont close ur doors to happiness, if one is closed another better one will definitely open up :"> |
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