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Array ( [sid] => 121546 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A Moment [time] => 2006-06-09 18:48:08 [hometext] => Just a Simple Poem. I'd Love Feedback on this one, or just for you to read this if you're in the mood. [bodytext] => The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

Rose petals and piano keys.
Autumn walks under the swaying trees.
Birds chirp and bunnies hop.
We stop and the leaves still fall.
We just sit, sit and watch it all.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

A hand and A hand,
so alone and alone.
A touch and they clasp,
bone to bone,
a perfect match.
By themselves they're so alone,
together they're a medicine,
a medicine all their own.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

A perfect nature scene,
green eyes cut yet sooth,
they only say a whisper,
a quiet note or two
of the symphony that lies,
that lies within you.
A glance and a tear,
a brief release of happiness
and you tell me,
"With you I have no fear."
Oh, what a beatiful symphony
that I have found here.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 2 [informant] => moses [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
A Moment

Contributed by moses on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 06:48:08 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

Rose petals and piano keys.
Autumn walks under the swaying trees.
Birds chirp and bunnies hop.
We stop and the leaves still fall.
We just sit, sit and watch it all.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

A hand and A hand,
so alone and alone.
A touch and they clasp,
bone to bone,
a perfect match.
By themselves they're so alone,
together they're a medicine,
a medicine all their own.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.

A perfect nature scene,
green eyes cut yet sooth,
they only say a whisper,
a quiet note or two
of the symphony that lies,
that lies within you.
A glance and a tear,
a brief release of happiness
and you tell me,
"With you I have no fear."
Oh, what a beatiful symphony
that I have found here.

The grass is green and sky is blue.
Around the world and back,
could never compare to a moment with you.





Copyright © moses ... [ 2006-06-09 18:48:08]
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Re: A Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by bronzen on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 07:09:30 PM AEST
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so nice


Re: A Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 9th June 2006 @ 08:28:01 PM AEST
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Moses~
My dear friend a most precious and beautifully penned poem you have presented to us 2day. It speaks the language of ur beautiful heart. I love the repetitive lines. A magical piece of poetry that is eloquently penned by the talented and gifted Moses~ Impressive and well worth the read as always. Shine on my dear friend.
love n hugs from ur fan/friend,
~*suzie Q*~


Re: A Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by Ruby2sdy on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 11:11:07 AM AEST
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Very lovely, awesome beat and rhythm to it; I also like the repeats, brilliant!

2sdyx


Re: A Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by ever1der on Saturday, 10th June 2006 @ 01:46:34 PM AEST
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fresh and soothing..very nice.


Re: A Moment (User Rating: 1 )
by themonk on Wednesday, 27th December 2006 @ 08:52:29 PM AEST
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my borther, i decided to make a comeback, i've gotten sick of poetry and i thopught it was only a bunch of fools crying to themselve on paper, but i cant hide that its my passion. Anyways glad to see ur still at it, this one was very special i love your personification of autom,big kudos to you. Your getting better and better man. Thiers low nahing fruit in the future for you. I've made an attempt at my comeback with one piece "a night in new york" heck it out. i must admit i'm rusty, but i'll get back in form eventually.
peaceasy.
themonk-ey?




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