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Array ( [sid] => 122115 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ [time] => 2006-06-21 21:50:57 [hometext] => For all those who have suffered at the expense of another individual~ There is still hope to guide your heart... [bodytext] => I bumped into you today
You stirred up my emotions
The dark thoughts Iíd left behind
Threw my mind into commotion

The pain found itís way again
Back into my ailing heart
Itís taken me so long to heal
Now slowly Iím falling apart

Silence is golden they say
But not when it comes to you
You took me to hell and back
There was nothing I could do

Iím in a panic stricken state
My eyes are filled with tears
You haunt me with the memories
I tried to forget all these years

Iíll find myself some courage
One day when time is kind
Iíll look you straight in the face
And itís fear in your eyes Iíll find
[comments] => 19 [counter] => 482 [topic] => 48 [informant] => eternal_dreamer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~

Contributed by eternal_dreamer on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 09:50:57 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I bumped into you today
You stirred up my emotions
The dark thoughts Iíd left behind
Threw my mind into commotion

The pain found itís way again
Back into my ailing heart
Itís taken me so long to heal
Now slowly Iím falling apart

Silence is golden they say
But not when it comes to you
You took me to hell and back
There was nothing I could do

Iím in a panic stricken state
My eyes are filled with tears
You haunt me with the memories
I tried to forget all these years

Iíll find myself some courage
One day when time is kind
Iíll look you straight in the face
And itís fear in your eyes Iíll find




Copyright © eternal_dreamer ... [ 2006-06-21 21:50:57]
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Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:02:10 PM AEST
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a flowing memory of sadness and pain. Im so sorry that your hurting. I understand this well. Im here if you need me. Your poetry always touches me nomatter the subject dear heart.

Michelle


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by carebear_06 on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:10:50 PM AEST
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i like this poem. it puts into words what i feel like when i go back to my home state which is only weeks away. not sure of your circumstances but i know the feeling. nice write.


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 10:22:09 PM AEST
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(((((((((( Susie Q From Across the Blue )))))))))

I can sooooooo relate to this. You have done well with this poem. I found myself thinking "eeeek I wouldn't want to be in that situation!".

But yeah, in these situations there is always hope.

Think....

Next!!!!

Very well written, Susie Q.

Tim


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Lucid_Tides on Wednesday, 21st June 2006 @ 11:58:23 PM AEST
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The emotional feel of this poem is very strong. It states every reason to be emotional and I feel everyone can relate to this. Well done.


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by bluestars on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 01:34:33 AM AEST
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Amazing poem!
I can so realite to this poem it just amazes me
Thank you so much for sharing this with all of us,
and i guess your right we can still find hope in our hearts... im still waiting for it

Best wishes,
~*Eve*~


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by jerseysue on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 02:07:08 AM AEST
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Being reminded of past events and hurts , can also give us the courage to go forward positively,This is how you have approached the subject. Very interesting poem as it relates a lot to my own experience. It is well written and flowed really well. Than you for letting us share it. Sue x


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ButchHoward on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 08:15:06 AM AEST
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I like the idea of turning the tables on those we fear. It is a testament to the indomitable human spirit from the poet's perspective. Well done!
Butch


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 07:09:29 PM AEST
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"Iíll find myself some courage
One day when time is kind
Iíll look you straight in the face
And itís fear in your eyes Iíll find"

I love this! When I became fearless, folks have often feared me for I called their bluff of artificiality. Time is kind right now, Suzie Q; I sensed you fearless 'n' free o' guilt from the first words I read o' yers. Fantastic 'n' a master's write.

wabl
KenMoore
cowboy


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 08:16:00 PM AEST
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You always write a poem that can share to all that is in deep pain. SuzieQ;s rainbow bridge ... remember... keep walking across.. you can make it .. read your poem again... and keep reading it...my sissy, remember, face those fears... tackle them... do not let them drag you down, you are strong... sometimes you just have to laugh at life... never give your power away.... fear someone or love someone.. choose...

Raquey Raccoon.. who loves you so very much..

Keep sharing those terrific writes, they contain a lot of feelings, emotions.. vivid pictures..


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 09:30:34 PM AEST
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The flow in this is quite wonderful, and if this is how you feel right now I am hoping it's just a setback and things will soon look up!!!!....I hope.. ;)


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd June 2006 @ 09:49:37 PM AEST
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Once again your magic comes thru but with sadness, drift slowly and u will see, be paitent and in time, all will be. As it should my friend.. A most beautiful gem in it's purest and most honest form. You are a weaver of
poetic beauty.

((((((((Sue)))))))))))


Ben


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Monday, 26th June 2006 @ 11:02:02 AM AEST
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Sometimes lifes lessons can be so cruel, can't they? This exemplifies that heartwrenching feeling it leaves us with so very well. As you know all too well Sue; only time can heal, and sometimes not even then...Great expression here; although sadness prevails, you wrote this wonderfully.




Scorp.


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 07:16:45 AM AEST
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S,

a poem that reflects all the feelings is runs through; pain, loss, fear, strength. I don't know why we never really recover. heartbreak and loss are as big a mystery as love. Touched the heart, it did.

S


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 05:03:13 PM AEST
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A poem of one in despair and yet in hope of better moments 2 come, and they will my friend. Beautifuly done Sue, your heart speaks delicately via the gentle voice of compassion. lovely peice of poetry.


(((((Sue))))))


Ben


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 09:28:52 PM AEST
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Your author's note says SO much of what I've come to expect from you Sue - especially the latter half.. not to mention the tortuous and painful beauty you wrought throughout.. my heart is but a cinder: that you have to endure these trials and rememberances.. and though you might confide in my ineffectual renderings.. there's nothing so strong as a women's intuition - and so I offer up what little comfort I can, in this.

As always..

Billy


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 1st July 2006 @ 02:00:26 PM AEST
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Oh Dear Susie Q, I could have written a poem just like this one, for it's a possession they hold over you! Stand straight and face their demons dear...........then you can be sure, it's fear you see in their eyes.............for sure!
Since I love to give advice.........and since I was there once. BEWARE!~
Steer clear dear............leave them alone for all Eternity..........or for ever!!!
Wonderful poem
Warm love
consue


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 2nd July 2006 @ 07:06:03 PM AEST
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My dearest Susie Q~
That you have endured such atrocities in
your life pains me to no end, dear girl.
I wish I could take it all away ..

I've mentioned this before to you, but I feel the
need to reiterate ... all the love this world holds
shall find you. Of that I'm sure as you so selflessly
send it out .. you are a real gem, hun.


*hugs*
~Breezy


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by xxbreathlessx on Thursday, 27th July 2006 @ 02:17:55 PM AEST
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God, this is so true and you do an amazing job representing the emotions the person goes through. amazing job, truly.


Re: ~*Dark Memories Left Behind*~ (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 30th April 2007 @ 06:49:32 PM AEST
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always a slap in the face when something like this happens, ouch even, i felt you in this poem, such beautiful expression of feeling, as ive grown to love and highly respect in your poems:)

love n' hugs nessa

roses




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