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Breathe

Contributed by lostinmyself on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:39:33 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe

Feel the grief, the anger seethe,
Churn and boil through my soul,
Tumble inside with a jerky control.

Heart sucked into a hollow void,
Love and compassion, scorned and detroyed,
Fury appearing, rampant and free...

Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe

Cry out in fear that the madness won't leave.
Stuck in a whirl of emotions ablur,
Temper is left where feelings once were.

Rationality makes its retreat,
Harsh words hanging on its defeat,
And truth in tones that you fear to recieve...

Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe

Breathe once again, through quiet reprieve,
Calm the pain as anger subsides,
Wait for the tears to muffle the cries.

When choking sobs will silence the scream...
Leaving only regret, where anger had been,
And open my ears to emotional pleas...

Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe

Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe

Breathe, be calm, breathe (scream) breathe...

.......





Copyright © lostinmyself ... [ 2006-07-03 09:39:33]
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Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:14:12 AM AEST
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excellently done!!!...

wiz


Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 10:34:15 AM AEST
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Wow Phyllis, I could feel the anger seething here. The deep breathing, I found myself doing. I can relate to this way too much. Well written piece. Loves ya, sis.
Peace, Laura


Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 01:35:59 PM AEST
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Great piece



Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 02:08:21 PM AEST
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... *wide-eyed stare at screen*


Philly ... WOW!! It's like you climbed inside me and pulled these words
from my very own soul!! You captured tremendous emotion here, hun.
TREMENDOUS!

Your conflict within is evident and holy wow, can you ever aritculate that well!

I think this piece is absolutely stunning! Even though it may have come from
inner frustration, it was so exquisitely put together .

I love it very much!!
(and relate all too well..)

*hugs*
~Breezy


Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by NoSaint on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 04:49:17 PM AEST
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Excellent

Shari


Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 3rd July 2006 @ 09:41:10 PM AEST
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Wow, this is amazing, Phyllis!!!!! I am stunned at how well you have relayed the emotion into this awesome poem.

And...um, yeah, Roxie said it so well I can't add much more.....so, yeah, what Roxie said.

Tim
(who is also relating to this all too well)



Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 03:08:27 AM AEST
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Phil~
You have poured out ur utmost inner thoughts and feelings in this write. One can feel ur emotions through ur words.
May the anger u feel in ur heart be replaced with warm and loving emotions.
Wishing you the very best sweet girl always~
love, hugs n prayers,
~*sue m*~


Re: Breathe (User Rating: 1 )
by Sagefairy on Tuesday, 4th July 2006 @ 10:01:22 PM AEST
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Yes breathe...
*hugs you*
It definitely gets the mood across, dear Philly.
J




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