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Never
Contributed by
bluestars
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Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 01:12:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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I'd never thought
you'd be the kind,
to leave me standing
here, alone.
How could you be so cruel?
How dare you not say the truth?
I'd never thought
you'd play this game
of make believe...
You made me believe that
we could somehow achieve
something more than what we could reach.
How could I be so blind?
How dare I keep you in mind?
I never thought, you could hurt me
this way, and just turn around
and walk away.
How could you be so mean?
I thought we were a team.
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bluestars
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2006-07-07 01:12:07]
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Re: Never
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by shelby on
Friday, 7th July 2006 @ 03:19:29 AM AEST
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Oh hun I can feel your sorrow and hurt here.
I'm so sorry for your pain and you captured it within a talented realm of perfect wording.
Michelle |
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Re: Never
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 11th August 2006 @ 01:41:04 PM AEST
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| awesome.....feelings exspressed so very well....I loved it |
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