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Cold Ocean Winds
Contributed by
one-curly-fry
on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 02:09:54 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Wild southern winds blow
cold ocean air
across my arms and neck
and it dawns on me
this doesnt matter
another conversation lost
to the next reality show
and the warmth
in the eyes if the opposite sex
frayed! stripped in misconception
this doesnt matter
I turn to my bare arms
hairs dance; on edge
wild southern winds blow
cold ocean air
this faint and lonely day
yet, I smile.
06/09/06
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Re: Cold Ocean Winds
(User Rating: 1 )
by deadheadpoet on
Saturday, 9th September 2006 @ 09:10:40 AM AEST
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Ya know, I really liked this. The brevity of it is wonderful, in the fact you say so very much, in so very few words.
I loved this line....
I turn to bare arms
hairs dance: on edge
Very peaceful and calming write. Thanks for sharing.
Peace, Laura
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