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Reflection in the Mirror
Contributed by
Nothingness
on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 12:02:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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Who am I and why and I here
Who is this reflecting in the mirror?
Her face is soaked by tears
Her eyes are scared by fears
Her wrist is covered in blood
Her heart has no one to love
Her head is always bowed
She never dares to speak out loud
She cuts herself just to feel
Dreams are dreams but this nightmare is real
Looking into this sad girls eyes
I am suddenly aware and I realize
I know the girl, mirrors dont lie
I am the girl wishing to die
My wrists are covered in blood
Its my heart that has no one to love
How I hate that mirror and what it shows
Every mistake I make that stupid mirror knows
How I wish it would break into a million pieces
As I sit here and look in the mirror my pain increases
Holding in my hand pieces of broken glass
I am still here, that girl in the mirror is here to last
But how the glass, it glitters so innocently
I suddenly realize there is a way to be free
Little mirror how I love you so much
I love the pain you cause and your cutting touch
Cut in deeper let the blood flow
Oh little mirror how I love you so
My life is fading my world is dying
No longer will that girl ever be crying
On the ground lies the broken mirror
And the happy girl is lying very near
Copyright ©
Nothingness
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2006-12-12 12:02:41]
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Re: Reflection in the Mirror
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by ever1der on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 12:16:10 PM AEST
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| the feelings are well worded here and the reader can feel the pain. I can visualize a reflection in the mirror..a very sad reflection. |
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Re: Reflection in the Mirror
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by Errious on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 12:39:49 PM AEST
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I thought i would just say: OH MY GOD!
I have never read a poem with that amount of feeling. It actually made my eyes water! That is hard to do with me. very hard. You say that poem is not one of your best poems? Well - I'd like to see some of your others then!!! lol. Absolutely fantastic. Amazed!
Well Done!
Tom |
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Re: Reflection in the Mirror
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by lyddie on
Tuesday, 12th December 2006 @ 10:16:04 PM AEST
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i like it i can understand what ur saying!
lydia |
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