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Alone
Contributed by
nothingness
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Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 08:45:56 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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You see the girl crying there
And all you do is sit and stare
Maybe you ask yourself why
Then brush it off and walk on by
And there she sits all alone
Fading into a world unknown
Her eyes fixed on the far away
Growing weaker day by day
Trapped between the living and dead
Dead at heart but living instead
Should be dulled by the pain
But its intensified driving her insane
Longing to laugh and smile
Dreaming of making life worthwhile
But how can she, when everyone passes along?
Never bothering to stop and ask whats wrong
You see her again walking slow
Tears falling and her head bowed low
Ignore it again and turn away
Just think to your self her life is great shes okay
And there she sits, all alone crying
Dreaming ever single day of finally dying
Why should I stay when no one is here to care?
I guess I know life is unfair
I just wish I didnt have to suffer alone
But I guess this pain is mine and mine alone
Copyright ©
nothingness
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2007-01-17 08:45:56]
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Re: Alone
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by darkangeleyes57 on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 08:48:35 AM AEST
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You have everyone here at YPDC... We are all here for you.. If you ever need to you can pm me... This was a good poem and I can relate.. Remember you have people here that care..
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Re: Alone
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by PhantomVampyress on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 11:39:40 AM AEST
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this is a very sad write.. you can feel the emotions.. you are not alone.. you have everyone here at this site.. if you ever need to talk any of us will be glad to help.. You are not alone in feeling that way.. I used to feel the same way as you.. there are good and bad people in the world and sometimes we get sucked in by the bad ones. but your not alone.. beauitful emotional felt write.. and remember we all care about you here
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Re: Alone
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by dougnut on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:31:24 PM AEST
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Great words from your heart once again.
Although rather sad. You know that you have people here who care.
Your writing speaks volumes The emotion you express so well
I always said you had a great gift in writing
this Poem proves it for sure.
KUDOS.
Pm me anytime.
God Bl;ess you .
Doug,
"THOUGHTS ARE LIVING THINGS WITH WINGS.
WHEN YOUR THOUGHT OF YOU NEED NEVER
FEEL ALONE."
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Re: Alone
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by yangdantien on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:57:28 PM AEST
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Well Done and perhaps this is why "That which does not kill me makes me stronger."
Well Done
Peace
Yangdantien |
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Re: Alone
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by brew on
Wednesday, 17th January 2007 @ 01:59:11 PM AEST
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People do care in their own ways.......Just like us poets, here.if we didnt care a tad we wouldnt take the time to comment. Your words poured saddness, but hope they can pour happiness, one day. Very well penned
Brew~ |
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Re: Alone
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by Kazzy1231 on
Wednesday, 24th January 2007 @ 02:32:09 PM AEST
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| Nice write,I often feel like this lately! |
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