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Untill We Meet Again
Contributed by
cooley1818
on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:33:20 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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calling out cries
upon the nights glowing moon
searching for the reasons
why you had left so soon
my minds drawing blanks
and my body lies still
paralized by the thought
of the love u had to kill
i have never found an answer
to the questions i had ask'd
and never will i know
so i must leave it in the past
but im stuck with these memories
with emotions so clear
i will futher myself from others
just to have u somewhere near
just talk to me please
let me get this off my chest
help me move on
its only for the best
how am i supposed to move on?
when u left me here to stray?
why cant u fix the problem?
nothings here to stay
but if u refuse this proposal
and the help that i ask'd
then make this the night
that this life will end at last
so please be true
to the next heart u see
dont let the troubles of love
cause another scene
so goodbye to you,
just pray for happiness to begin
but nothing last forever
just untill we meet again....
Copyright ©
cooley1818
... [
2007-01-29 10:33:20]
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Re: Untill We Meet Again
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by PhantomVampyress on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 10:42:51 AM AEST
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this is a very expressive and emotional write on lost love.. I like how you worded that and the ending is very good.. sometimes people leave because they don't deal with problems and sometimes when they leave their isn't any problem and they are doing something wrong and have something hidden and they don't want to face the other person in the relationship or deal with a problem so they run away. very well written
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Re: Untill We Meet Again
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by JoeyTrib1550 on
Monday, 29th January 2007 @ 01:36:19 PM AEST
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Really good emotional read
I can relate to this (which is not the best^^)
I really liked it, keep it up |
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Re: Untill We Meet Again
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by emystar on
Monday, 1st August 2011 @ 02:23:26 AM AEST
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| I heard that good work.. |
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