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Array ( [sid] => 132344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => THE END OF HELL [time] => 2007-03-03 21:38:52 [hometext] => this is where im at, at this point!! [bodytext] => Iíve tried
Iíve gave
Iíve gave
Iíve taken
And now look Iím still lost
I cant go on living in this hell
I have loved you and him unconditionally
I have tried to save something I thought worth saving
What happened to that place that thing
A home the happiness
Can it so easily be given up on
I guess we all choose our battles
And this one CANT be mine anymore
You and him are broken
Beyond repair
Torn from reality
Eyes blurred from the addiction
Eyes blurred from the hate
Guess what your problems are still here
And I am too
Tell me what you want
Tell me to leave
Tell me you want to hurt me
Its to late I am what I am
I should have got out a long time ago
But no my heart yearns for you and him
My eyes cry for you and him
My soul aches for you and him
Yet you take all that for granted
You will see one day
Rock bottom will come
And you will see what you lost
And Iím sorry but you cant get me back
Iím broke now my spirit is gone
I cant do this
I cant let you bring me down
I got to be something
To not be you
I will be something
You wait and see
And when your sitting there
Regretting your past
I will look and smile in sympathy
Yet I will still love and care
But know I cant help
I tried
I loved
I cared
I gave
I toke
I cried
I sweated
I worried
I laughed
I got mad
I got sad
I never saw happy
But I guess its time
So with this I say
AND NOW ITS DONE
I QUIT
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THE END OF HELL

Contributed by heatherslostdreams on Saturday, 3rd March 2007 @ 09:38:52 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Iíve tried
Iíve gave
Iíve gave
Iíve taken
And now look Iím still lost
I cant go on living in this hell
I have loved you and him unconditionally
I have tried to save something I thought worth saving
What happened to that place that thing
A home the happiness
Can it so easily be given up on
I guess we all choose our battles
And this one CANT be mine anymore
You and him are broken
Beyond repair
Torn from reality
Eyes blurred from the addiction
Eyes blurred from the hate
Guess what your problems are still here
And I am too
Tell me what you want
Tell me to leave
Tell me you want to hurt me
Its to late I am what I am
I should have got out a long time ago
But no my heart yearns for you and him
My eyes cry for you and him
My soul aches for you and him
Yet you take all that for granted
You will see one day
Rock bottom will come
And you will see what you lost
And Iím sorry but you cant get me back
Iím broke now my spirit is gone
I cant do this
I cant let you bring me down
I got to be something
To not be you
I will be something
You wait and see
And when your sitting there
Regretting your past
I will look and smile in sympathy
Yet I will still love and care
But know I cant help
I tried
I loved
I cared
I gave
I toke
I cried
I sweated
I worried
I laughed
I got mad
I got sad
I never saw happy
But I guess its time
So with this I say
AND NOW ITS DONE
I QUIT




Copyright © heatherslostdreams ... [ 2007-03-03 21:38:52]
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Re: THE END OF HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhei76 on Sunday, 4th March 2007 @ 12:45:29 PM AEST
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Strong powerful words.
Yes, you need to do it for yourself
It's good to see some one open their eyes
and pick up for the best of them.
God bless


Re: THE END OF HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by PhantomVampyress on Monday, 5th March 2007 @ 11:04:39 AM AEST
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this is a very powerful expressed piece here.. you can feel the frustration.. sometimes we have to take a step back and let people make their own mistakes and take their own downfalls that is how they learn.. sometimes our help isn't wanted by those around. but they see later and they learn a lesson.. great job here

vampyress Jenni


Re: THE END OF HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Bleedthelove on Thursday, 8th March 2007 @ 06:21:49 PM AEST
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Very emotional and nicely expressed. Good job.


Re: THE END OF HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Mila on Tuesday, 1st May 2007 @ 08:10:03 PM AEST
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I realy like your writing is filled with such strong words & i can almost feel what your going through! Hang in there & keep writing it helps.




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