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The Two Suns Set
Contributed by
joelmuses
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Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 02:33:42 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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The dawn
Will break and break
Again as the day leads
Towards the end
I sit amidst
What wasnt said
And drown the left
With the right in check
Two, with a light
That shines only when
I have my eyes closed
Blinds half drawn
The rising of the setting
With the shade of night
Close at hand
And a candle, near my bed
A sun, and a second
Hand in hand
Stroll neatly towards
The bleak inheritance
Of emptiness and
Half-dried tears
The Two Suns Set
On a hopeless world
Copyright ©
joelmuses
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2007-05-21 14:33:42]
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Re: The Two Suns Set
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by shelby on
Monday, 21st May 2007 @ 03:56:24 PM AEST
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Of emptiness and half dried teats
That line is so solid I felt this write right to the very core.
~Michelle~ |
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Re: The Two Suns Set
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd May 2007 @ 09:30:08 AM AEST
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beautiful...
love n' hugs nessa |
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