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Array ( [sid] => 138540 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A GIRL [time] => 2007-11-16 02:46:47 [hometext] => WHEN HEARTS CONNECT [bodytext] => it's 8:55-ish....the kids left for school

the house is quiet

its rainy and windy

for me...perfect



I sit at the kitchen table

coffee in hand

look out the window

to my left

the trees swaying....

as if they are dancing...

beautiful

the leaves...

the colors...

breathtaking




the rain comforts me

as it sounds like music

on the roof

the house feels cozy and warm

I feel alive

safe

and thankful




now the rain reminds me of you

I hear you in my head

telling me im weird for liking rain

feelings of love

rush into my heart

once again

this is becoming a pattern



I smile....



a girl....just a girl

miles away from me

a small silver machine

my only connection to u



all of it unseen

nothing tangible

youre not in front of me

I cant hold you

you cant hold me back

I cant walk with you

you cant walk beside me

I cant look at you

you cant look my way

I cant wipe your tears

you cant reach for my hand for comfort

I cant hear your laughter

I cant see your joy

you dont know what its like

to see mine



yet....

I do feel you

I know...you feel me

I do see you

I know...you see me

I do hear you

I know...you hear me

so intensely

so real

so completely




my mind understands you...

as you try to understand yourself

my heart opens for you...

as my arms would open to hold you

my love grows for you..

as I see you learn about life



a girl ...just a girl

miles away from me

yet closer then imagined possible



the rain is stronger now

like it needs to be heard

a message its sending...

the skies open up

and let it all out....



to be seen

to be heard

to be held

to be connected

to be cherished



to be loved....fully....unconditionally


to be......a friend....for real....


for forever




a girl ...just a girl...

the defintion of love <333



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A GIRL

Contributed by searchingmyself on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 02:46:47 AM in AEST
Topic: FriendshipPoetry



it's 8:55-ish....the kids left for school

the house is quiet

its rainy and windy

for me...perfect



I sit at the kitchen table

coffee in hand

look out the window

to my left

the trees swaying....

as if they are dancing...

beautiful

the leaves...

the colors...

breathtaking




the rain comforts me

as it sounds like music

on the roof

the house feels cozy and warm

I feel alive

safe

and thankful




now the rain reminds me of you

I hear you in my head

telling me im weird for liking rain

feelings of love

rush into my heart

once again

this is becoming a pattern



I smile....



a girl....just a girl

miles away from me

a small silver machine

my only connection to u



all of it unseen

nothing tangible

youre not in front of me

I cant hold you

you cant hold me back

I cant walk with you

you cant walk beside me

I cant look at you

you cant look my way

I cant wipe your tears

you cant reach for my hand for comfort

I cant hear your laughter

I cant see your joy

you dont know what its like

to see mine



yet....

I do feel you

I know...you feel me

I do see you

I know...you see me

I do hear you

I know...you hear me

so intensely

so real

so completely




my mind understands you...

as you try to understand yourself

my heart opens for you...

as my arms would open to hold you

my love grows for you..

as I see you learn about life



a girl ...just a girl

miles away from me

yet closer then imagined possible



the rain is stronger now

like it needs to be heard

a message its sending...

the skies open up

and let it all out....



to be seen

to be heard

to be held

to be connected

to be cherished



to be loved....fully....unconditionally


to be......a friend....for real....


for forever




a girl ...just a girl...

the defintion of love <333







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Re: A GIRL (User Rating: 1 )
by TheGrimReapersHourglass on Friday, 16th November 2007 @ 04:23:59 AM AEST
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