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Through the Looking Glass
Contributed by
LoveStruck_Hippie
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Saturday, 1st March 2008 @ 08:21:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Come with me on a journey within these walls
A sense of adventure where one can surely fall
Silently follow me to a place where dreams and hopes collide
Open your heart and mind, allow them to be touched by fate
Entrapped within a moment most have yet to taste
Lose yourself within the magic
Your heart will truly see
The peace you’ve sought though the looking glass
Was Always
You and Me
~Peace~
Shannon
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2008-03-01 20:21:56]
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Re: Through the Looking Glass
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by shelby on
Sunday, 2nd March 2008 @ 08:23:44 AM AEST
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Shannon, this shines with love. A beautiful write. All will work out fine and I am happy for the two of you.
Hugs
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Re: Through the Looking Glass
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by liquidsunshine on
Wednesday, 5th March 2008 @ 10:30:50 AM AEST
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| This one made me genuinely smile. Lovely little piece. Well done, dear. |
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Re: Through the Looking Glass
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 7th March 2008 @ 02:48:58 PM AEST
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I love the anticipation this line,
Entrapped within a moment most have yet to taste . . .
along with the whole poem and the tittle and the picture your writting is truly beautiful, it captures the heart and in turn ispires the imagination, your style is very vivid . . .
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Re: Through the Looking Glass
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by jesusofholland on
Tuesday, 29th April 2008 @ 04:58:59 AM AEST
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| Touching and uplifting. Whoever this was written for is a lucky man to have someone so well versed in the laws of love. Beautiful. |
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