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In Silence
Contributed by
lostinmyself
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Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 04:36:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Somewhere inside, a part of her died, it trembled and moaned, and quietly cried, it became hollow between, all the lives that it dreamed, and in the end there was no way that it could have survived.
In silence she spoke, and the poetry came, but in between every breath, the words became changed, in hope, she had tried, and in hope she had died
in silence she spoke and the words were denied.
Somewhere inside, the hope became doubt, it burdened the flame, and it quickly went out, her heart soon turned cold, and her muse slowly died in the end she had known it was barely alive
In silence she spoke, but the words were just lies.
And somewhere inside her, the poetry died.
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by emystar on
Sunday, 6th April 2008 @ 05:00:59 PM AEST (User
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Life is hard at it's best but welcome back, friend.
huggs, luv, prayer,
emy
When we bounce back we're back stronger and so is the poetry.
have you ever realized that when the pain subsides for a minete,when u re gain your strength great writes like this are born? |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by SilverRain on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 04:18:32 AM AEST (User
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You speak of an emotion which many of us share. Beautifully expressed. Touching and powerful. |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by LoveStruck_Hippie on
Monday, 7th April 2008 @ 06:21:20 AM AEST (User
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Philly,
First let me say it is wonderful to see your name grace the home page.
Now, for the poem ...
Truly touching and beautiful work. The emotion and internal struggle spill out in this piece. I tried to pick out a favorite stanza or line and was unable to do so ... this poem is just wonderful as a whole.
Peace
~Shannon |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Thursday, 10th April 2008 @ 05:02:30 AM AEST (User
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Dang!!
You're not the only that missed it! I love this so much sis!
Beautifully penned. great rythmn and rhyme, and what a wonderful format....I relate to it too....sigh...dang! |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 12th April 2008 @ 10:09:53 AM AEST (User
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I cannot believe that the flame has died... No way!! This is truly awesome...You should give it another shot... Hope all is well with you...
Jenni |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by jesusofholland on
Monday, 28th April 2008 @ 09:32:36 AM AEST (User
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You've obviously rekindled that flame, because this is a beautiful and flowing poem. I'm humbled talent, but also inspired. Absolutely gorgeous! |
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Re: In Silence
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Monday, 6th October 2008 @ 05:45:37 AM AEST (User
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OH hun!! That last line was just excruciating! I am so affected by these words.
They are extremely haunting, as they fly through distilled air, clinging to
the lost victims of indifference. Damn hun. Your poetry always touches and
moves me to where I find it hard to articulate my exact thoughts on it.
I will say this though. The poetry did not die. Not if this write is any witness.
Beautiful work sweets, as always. :)
*hugs you tight*
~ Breezy
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