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Array ( [sid] => 146699 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wondering... [time] => 2008-12-07 15:55:59 [hometext] => My first poem... I'd appericiate your opinion! [bodytext] => What if all this..is just a dream
and i wake up, without telling you
how i feel?!

What if my mind created you
as a perfection that doesn't exist,
What if this feeling is killing me slowly,
but I'm taking the risk?!

What if this is just a game where
no one wins, what if emptiness and tears
is all it brings?!

What happens when someday,
nothing will be the same,
will you remember the first song
we danced? Will you still remember
my name?

Well... I guess this is not a dream,
and I'm already awake,
I'm not brave enough, to tell you how I feel,
it's something I cant take!

You're not my imagination,
you do exist... I can tell by the look in
your eyes that I cant resist...

An if this feeling is about to kill me,
I don't mind!
Cause' at least I'd know I was alive,
at least I'd know I wasn't blind!
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 162 [topic] => 48 [informant] => meandyou [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Wondering...

Contributed by meandyou on Sunday, 7th December 2008 @ 03:55:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



What if all this..is just a dream
and i wake up, without telling you
how i feel?!

What if my mind created you
as a perfection that doesn't exist,
What if this feeling is killing me slowly,
but I'm taking the risk?!

What if this is just a game where
no one wins, what if emptiness and tears
is all it brings?!

What happens when someday,
nothing will be the same,
will you remember the first song
we danced? Will you still remember
my name?

Well... I guess this is not a dream,
and I'm already awake,
I'm not brave enough, to tell you how I feel,
it's something I cant take!

You're not my imagination,
you do exist... I can tell by the look in
your eyes that I cant resist...

An if this feeling is about to kill me,
I don't mind!
Cause' at least I'd know I was alive,
at least I'd know I wasn't blind!




Copyright © meandyou ... [ 2008-12-07 15:55:59]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Wondering... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 12th December 2008 @ 05:22:38 PM AEST
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Welcome to the club.I think the main thing here is to enjoy what you do and treat anything said about your work as a good thing.
Great start..........keep on writing

Steve


Re: Wondering... (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy on Tuesday, 20th January 2009 @ 07:44:45 AM AEST
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you can really feel your love in this peom....well done great write!

Puppy :)




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