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I Bet Writing About It Won't Change Anything
Contributed by
anomalei
on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 01:42:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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it's that feeling;
that i'll never let go
like magnets -
there's so separation
even though likes
should repel
there was no escaping
this attraction
so that leaves me with now
still holding on
when i have nothing
here to even grasp
the glimpses of you,
pictures of past
those words
these melodies
and it hurts
more than i thought
you would ever
hurt me.
i tried to leave you out
i thought i did
killed every part of you;
like you killed me
i keep running away
from the parts in me
that remember you
but i don't know where
where can i go?
with you i always knew
even if we never had
any direction
everytime i try
to turn to that new paper
over;
your words follow.
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anomalei
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2009-02-22 13:42:46]
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Re: I Bet Writing About It Won't Change Anything
(User Rating: 1 )
by owkenny on
Sunday, 22nd February 2009 @ 08:17:40 PM AEST
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| its nice, i like the layout and realness of it. I love the first two sections and how they play off of eachother. |
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