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The Little Bird
Contributed by
jessb3
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Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 01:39:11 AM in AEST
Topic:
NaturePoetry
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I sat down on the window seat
My face close to the glass
I calmly watched the world outside
And all that came to pass
I soon turned my attention
To a bird up in the sky
His little feathers black as night
This fellow was not shy
Twas like he sensed my watching him
For he kept up until
He deftly flew towards my seat
And perched upon the sill
He stared at me with beady eye
And I stared back at him
Until he cocked his little head
And flew off on a whim
He flit, he flew, he ducked, he weaved!
The show seemed just for me!
He put a smile upon my face
And filled my heart with glee
The little bird continued on
But soon flew right away
And so I thanked him silently
For brightening up my day
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Re: The Little Bird
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by spud on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 02:36:46 AM AEST
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Hi Kathy,
It's the little things that prove to us why we love
life. I loved it - a chirpy little poem to start off my
day. Well written!
Tommy
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Re: The Little Bird
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by spud on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 02:40:29 AM AEST
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Hi,
Me again. Sorry - don't know why I called you
Kathy - was between comments on your poem
and KathyT's. Anyway, its still morning here -
haven't fully awoken. Forgiven??
Tommy
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Re: The Little Bird
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by jessb3 on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 02:51:24 AM AEST
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| That's okay...all is forgiven. Thanks for your comment! :o) |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by TsunamiWaverider on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:54:01 AM AEST
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Brilliant!! A happy little ditty that also put a smile on my face. Makes a nice refreshing change reading something light and happy instead of all the deep and morose ones that some folks consistently write. Well done yet again Jess.
Regards, John. |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:13:03 AM AEST
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ah
this is so good
well done.... |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by arclargo on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 07:50:17 AM AEST
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A very nice poem.
It reminds me of a happy version of Edgar Allen Poe's "The Raven". Was that the inspiration? |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by Ambivalence on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 02:30:18 PM AEST
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adorable to say the least... it was as if this happened to me by just reading this! what a subtle yet extraordinary thing... great job
take care
-K.Z. |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by PreciousKitten on
Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:33:11 PM AEST
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| that's one interesting bird. i hope you meet him again one day. |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by windowguy on
Saturday, 3rd October 2009 @ 01:30:23 AM AEST
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| Delightfully uplifting ditty! We all do well not to miss these little heart-warming moments that happen our way. |
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Re: The Little Bird
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by Nonefound on
Thursday, 16th December 2010 @ 02:35:26 AM AEST
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| How lovely, I felt like I was there. |
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