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I will wait for you

Contributed by LadyRose on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 11:02:57 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



Its freezing cold
the ground layered thick with snow
the air crisp and ice cold
yet I sit with a thin dress on
in a chair by the river side
I refuse to move from here
I will wait for you until you come
even through the blistering cold
through any storm I will endure this pain
I will wait for you
even if in vane




Copyright © LadyRose ... [ 2009-09-24 11:02:57]
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Re: I will wait for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 11:23:18 AM AEST
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I simply adore the message of dedication, devotion and love. Oh, and the imagery of the poem itself. Again, beautiful writing my dear.

Brrrr... it's making me cold. :-)

But in all reality, go in and put something warm on. Wait by the fire.. or wait by/in the heat cause if he isn't home in a reasonable time then he may not be worth it. :-)

Thank you for an enjoyable read.

Tim


Re: I will wait for you (User Rating: 1 )
by PreciousKitten on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 03:15:54 PM AEST
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wow is all i can say about this poem. the funny part of this, i am willing to do the same thing.


Re: I will wait for you (User Rating: 1 )
by jessb3 on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 08:06:50 PM AEST
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Very nice work! I can definitely relate to this as I have often been the girl in this poem.


Re: I will wait for you (User Rating: 1 )
by JRLatin77 on Thursday, 24th September 2009 @ 08:07:26 PM AEST
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timotheus17, You cracked me up with that, The same thought kind of flew through my mind. But more like what if this guy is stuck in traffic? At least put on a coat before you catch pneumonia… ( Smile )
All jokes aside,…
I really did like this piece. It showed an extreme of what someone in love will endure. For her love was as important as life it self. I consider that to be something very "Beautiful"…


Re: I will wait for you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 7th October 2009 @ 04:49:29 PM AEST
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Beautiful imagery, beautiful dedication.

-Phil




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