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Glass
Contributed by
iodinelove
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Tuesday, 20th April 2010 @ 07:54:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Broken
Bits and pieces
Fill the width of my hand
Tumble across skin
Etch decades
Across calluses
Inflame scars
Sparkle endlessly
Iridescent dreams
Scattered across
Linoleum floors
Copyright ©
iodinelove
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2010-04-20 19:54:29]
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Re: Glass
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by duff on
Wednesday, 21st April 2010 @ 07:15:29 PM AEST
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This is very abstract. A journey of words branching out in different directions. Unique and well done.
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Re: Glass
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by Breezy on
Thursday, 22nd April 2010 @ 07:01:56 AM AEST
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I like the ideas this piece stirs and how it gently
stimulates the muse. Perfect word usage; words
that could just as easily stand alone, but when
coupled in this, dilate the creative eye.
Well written! -- Achelois
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