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poem
Contributed by
reubenrich
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Saturday, 17th July 2010 @ 04:13:10 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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poem.
the amatuer poet i write,
at first hesitent, tentative with fright.
interchangable text, synonymous script,
a swell of ideas, ascertained and unzipped.
escalation of pluck,
defiant rapture,
smash, break, violance and fracture.
bury the sword, hide the dagger,
executioner silenced, raise the anchor.
roving sentiment, then silence again,
lullaby fades, fever's remain.
darkness through night, and the day,
blinded by fear and what they may say.
watchman cries, come back to me!
brooding tempest, calypso, at sea.
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Re: poem
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by andrewjones12 on
Thursday, 22nd July 2010 @ 08:26:04 AM AEST
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i loved your write! the use of intellectual script was most intreeging.
though i cant spell, i feel words would mend had letters been bonded well.
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