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Array ( [sid] => 165316 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => She [time] => 2011-03-17 02:21:17 [hometext] => This how awoman feels ina bad relationship and wants herself heard [bodytext] => Round and round and up and down
My life goes never knowing if it will stop
It seems the more I better myself
The more people put me down
to the level they think I should be at
To where they can keep me in place
The place where I have no voice
The place where I have no rights
To be under the thumb of many
Told what and when to do things
Told by the ones who knocked me down
Told how I should act and dress
Where and when I can go
What I can have and when I can use it
Who I can talk to and see
As if I'm a toy puppet or a pet on a lease
Sometimes treated like a queen
Then tossed to the side again
Treated like a old pair of shoes
At other time like a common whore
I'm there just to feed their desires
So much hurt and anger I feel
My heart is beating with tears of sorrow
My soul is lost at times
My thoughts are of self destruction
When will my life be calm again
Is all this spinning going to stop
Deep inside I will have control
My voice will be heard and with strength
I will stand tall and face the obstacle before me
No man shall ever knock me down again
Now is the time for me
Listen hear My Life is mine
[comments] => 1 [counter] => 206 [topic] => 6 [informant] => wapalu55 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )
She

Contributed by wapalu55 on Thursday, 17th March 2011 @ 02:21:17 AM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry



Round and round and up and down
My life goes never knowing if it will stop
It seems the more I better myself
The more people put me down
to the level they think I should be at
To where they can keep me in place
The place where I have no voice
The place where I have no rights
To be under the thumb of many
Told what and when to do things
Told by the ones who knocked me down
Told how I should act and dress
Where and when I can go
What I can have and when I can use it
Who I can talk to and see
As if I'm a toy puppet or a pet on a lease
Sometimes treated like a queen
Then tossed to the side again
Treated like a old pair of shoes
At other time like a common whore
I'm there just to feed their desires
So much hurt and anger I feel
My heart is beating with tears of sorrow
My soul is lost at times
My thoughts are of self destruction
When will my life be calm again
Is all this spinning going to stop
Deep inside I will have control
My voice will be heard and with strength
I will stand tall and face the obstacle before me
No man shall ever knock me down again
Now is the time for me
Listen hear My Life is mine




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Re: She (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 30th March 2011 @ 07:31:19 PM AEST
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Awesome writing.
Very powerful.
Huggs, blessing's,
emy




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