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OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!
Contributed by
Majidlawal
on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:17:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
abstract
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Oh wheel of fortune you paved the way for our material wishes now you must be tired and weak
Our beautiful dreams were violently chased riding steadily on your forever rolling wheels
even on sunny and rainy days our hopes and visions never ceased
so why give up now when the peak of fortune we desire has not been reached?
how weary and frail you must be
how sick and old
so cruel we are to you for the worldly possesions we crave for slowly unfolds
for the long journey ahead you shall be laid to rest for the time being
i say this with tears and joy burning my soul
Oh wheel of fortune forever you remain ours to spin!
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Majidlawal
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2011-04-26 05:17:16]
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Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!
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by Banjosandwitch on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:34:43 AM AEST
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| abstract yes very lol |
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Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!
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by Majidlawal on
Tuesday, 26th April 2011 @ 05:58:33 AM AEST
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| yeah..thatz what i enjoy doing best..writting abstract,war and death poems |
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Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!
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by gypsymaddness on
Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 01:30:55 AM AEST
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| wow, this is different. makes me think, that we DO wish and dream alot.and makes me wonder; will the wheel of fortune really be tired and discouraged? man,great poem! |
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Re: OH WHEEL OF FORTUNE!
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by Majidlawal on
Wednesday, 27th April 2011 @ 09:04:18 AM AEST
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| YEAH!!we all dream a whole lot..thanks man |
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